Jack Frost.
Jack frost is so cold .
Jack frost is so chilly and so cold.
He makes grass so icy.
By Lukas
I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
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Wednesday, June 12, 2019
in writing today we learnt how to make a poem that is called haiku poem and it was about jack frost it is so easy.
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Hi Lukas I like your work because you are describing what your work is.
ReplyDeleteHi Lucas
ReplyDeleteI really like your haiku. It reminds me of my haiku poems that I made in the past. Maybe next time you could check you poem over the last line is 6 syllables. Why did you do jack frost?
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Aliyah