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In Hurumanu we have been working on some tasks and I am doing Creative writing, I can show you it! this is it! its lots of reading
Waka Tapu, Creative Writing,
By Lukas!
Hope You Enjoy It!
I'm on the waka. I can hear splashes from the water, and I can smell salt from the water, and noises from the paddle things on the water. And I can feel the smooth water and I can see the waka and some things in the sea while I'm on the Waka. The night has begun! Time to sleep on the waka for a bit….
Now it is the morning, we can get back to going across the ocean.
I can hear the little waves from pushing in the water to make the waka move. The sun is here now, keep moving!! I can feel the cold water in the ocean! It is really cold. Hours have passed, nearly night time again….
To be continued………
We are not going to sleep! Keep moving till we get there, *drinks water* ok keep moving!! 2 hours have passed… We have made it!! After like 3 days! On the waka surviving…… The End.
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